i think i should point out first then,the characteristic of the MC is kind of well cheesy,a bit childish,cheery,playful and kinda cute?
next the demon look not that bad,yes it seem unatural but not bad but kind of look like an Experiment subject of some crazy guy
next the character is fine and all as the art style is already Unique but i kinda think that when the Vein is showing it does look great but also kinda look like mad? is that the word?
next the music sound and sound effect are great but if i didn't lower it a bit it kinda loud but that is fine
the writing style is cute with the emote and a bit of teasing yourself and the character which light up the overall mood
the story progression is okay,a bit weird but that is fine as it just mean more thing to look into
that is all i can think and put into word from me,don't think much of it and great work so far
have a nice day and good luck.
Thank you very much Mr Aki for giving out your honest review! \(>w<)/✨
Btw, sorry about the sound volume!(QwQ) Ngl I do need some proofreading before I posted it in here cuz I work alone and there's also no one else I know who has the interest to read them for me in real-time at that time. If you ask me it's always seemed and sounded the same for me no matter how many times I edited the game.(q~q)
That's why I need more of your reviews from you readers as much as possible and fix the game and not repeat the same mistakes in the immediate future. Hope all of you, including you Mr Aki, to give me a similar type of commentary after I'd posted the next build which is due a few days from now.
HAPPY HOLIDAY AND CHEERS EVERYONE!\(✨w✨)/