Now, I may be a bit biased, but practically anything Lovecrafty/eldritch horror gets big points from me, but this was really rad. It meshes well with Lovecraft lore, very otherworldy and unknowable, and really just gross. I really vibe with the way you told this story too. Very akin to Lovecrafts sometimes obnoxiously flowery writing, it just really set the scene nicely. Congrats on your first game!