Seen this over at F95
This isn't much but it makes the intro look better.
https://mega.nz/file/7W5gGJaB#RLmYwQ_v61Xvqr3tp7PBkTRPH3rb627fj1uEecJKofA
Things you might want to consider:
- Visual Novels should have sound. Even if your budget is low that doesn't mean you can't include free resources, just credit any artist used.
https://freemusicarchive.org/music/Dee_Yan-Key/Georg_Bchners_Leonce_and_Lena/07-... - Include links to your Patreon, Itch.io, and Discord pages as easy advertising. Filling in the About info is a good idea too.
- Used your Patreon icon as a base to make some icons for the game.
You can review the changes I made with https://winmerge.org
Good luck with your game!