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Hi there,

sorry for the long post, but I played three of your games: Forgotten Paradise, Pandora's Box 1 and 2 and I want to share some thoughs and hopefully make a contructive review. I really have to say, that your graphic style is amazing, the renders and scenes are really nice to look at. There's some minor details when one mesh go through another (the most noticible is when Ellie and Scarlet are french kissing, the Scarlet nose goes right through Ellie's cheeks), but it's still ok, I don't mind that much.

But I need to ask what's your fetish ?! It looks like you have a thing for fat or weird or fat and weird older mens with hot young girls, because it really striked me in all three games (Amir, Miguel, Ivan, Dan, Shop owner and Larry the neighbor) and I have to say, these scenes are hard to watch for me, even think about them is hard and I avoided them completely, if I could.

From what I saw in your games, foot fetish from your perspective looks like something very submissive and perverted and I get it, because when someone like to lick sweat, smelly and salty feet, that person is definitely a pervert and probably submissive one. But for instance, I only like clean, nice, egyptian type feet and yeah I kinda see different between feet types, because I have foot fetish. I see what you did in Pandora's Box 1, when Eugene wants footjob from Nadia and you made a submissive thing from it. I get that and really like that. Foot fetishist are not all submissive, but I can see your point of view and it makes me think about that, how other people might think about this fetish.

One thing is also nonstop occuring. Every single male character cum like Peter North. There's not much guys who can cum like that, but in your universe is every single one like that, no variates and even can cum like every 2 minutes. It seems you want to makes mens the peak of evolution or something. Not a single girl are able to swallow all the cum, even if she is promiscuit whores, who should be able to swallow like a champ. I think, it would be better, when there's some variaties, some really capable girls and some really uncapable ones, same for the mens and the main male character should really choose with who he would lay on the bed, because there's no way he can lay with 5 girls in a row. And I don't really get it, why you put text like "you positioned you cock into her vagina" on screen, when there's a self explaining image and we all can see what's happening, it's weird.

Also, porn games are not only about great looking scenes, but the huge aspect of the arousement is dirty talk. It's really not about things like "you dirty slut, clean my cum with your tongue" and similar generic stuff. Darktoz makes really wonderful work in this matter. Most of his games have very simple scenes, but he elevates them with very good quality of dirty talk. You should definitely play something like Femdom City M.A.N.T.I.S. to learn things or two about dirty talk, because this aspect is really missing in your games.

There's a few scenes/persons that I consider very great, like:

White alien scene which leads to bad ending, when she turns and put her ass and pussy through the hole, magnificent work.

Elastic Alien, which leads to Alien pet ending (my favorite ending), shame there's not much scene with her, she was extremelly hot and have the most gorgeos body and feet in the game.

Also Luna is the best woman in the game, strong, beatiful and passionate.

Obviously for me, the Wendy's scenes was really great and I preffer her ending more than ending with anybody else. Lilly's ending was nice, but too sweet, too sweet even my teeth hurts :D

The scene where Nadia finally tells to Eugene why they don't have sex anymore and Eugene falls on his knees was great scene, nice to watch, but Nadia is a real hypocritical bitch there and this was the main reason I stop care about her at all.

I really hoped, the receptionist from the gym would have more scenes, but she didn't, which is also shame.

Akasha is the best character of the game, I really like her introducing feet scene and every scene with her. I'm not really a fun of Mira, but she worship Akasha and Akasha was still the boss who got worshipped, so no complains there. Akasha was also the main reason I played the sequel, because I was not really thrilled by the main story, but I wanted to see her again and how her story continues (so far I'm disappointed how she got soft and pathetic, but I got hope she get to the top once more and again she will be worshipped). btw: no prison in the world would allow her to wear piercings during her time in it.

Scarlet, even though she is a complete whore and had sex with extremelly weird looking kid on toilet, she looks like a good character who can develop to great character and she is smoking hot.

And my favorite one is definitely Ellie. I admire how you modeled her. She is absolutely grogeous, beatiful and great. I love her freckles, it's so adorable, she's absolute cutie and she has very nice egyptian type feet. I hope to see the most of her, because I'm not really interrest in Eugene or Nadia that much, but I'm absolutely thrilled by Ellie's story, more then Akasha's at this point.

btw: one last thing I have to say. I really absolutely hate when girls wear black socks, it's real gross to me and I really don't like renders and scenes where black socks on girls occurs. If you can and I beg of you, please don't dress them to girls, it's really gross.

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From my 4 years of doing this, this has to be the most weird reply I've gotten yet.

There is a difference between giving a constructive review on the game and implying I should make a game based on your taste and desires. Two very different things. I don't make a game based on someone else's wishes. It is literally impossible to please everyone. Even when I add optional NTR content people that dislike NTR still continue to be unhappy.

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I think you totally misunderstood the point I was trying to made. You didn't even reply to my question, what's your fetish and went totally on your assumptions, which is sad. I was really trying to do a review and only suggest one thing - don't dress girls to black socks and nothing more and of course, I'm well aware it's up to you, what you will do in your games, it was just a request and nothing more.

In my post, I wrote about characters and changes in those characters and about some stuff in scenes and I understand that it could sound like I was implying something, but I wasn't. I accept the fact of these changes, your choices and I'm moving on. I just wanted to wrote my feelings about those things, that's all and there's come your misunderstanding, where you get the wrong impression.

The fun part is, I spent 2 hours writing that post, because english is not my main language and I really tried my best to write it right and I failed. It hurts to see, that all that work is going to waste, because of misunderstanding, but it's life, I guess. So.. I wish you good luck to you and happy working !

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English is not his first language either

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so maybe that's the reason he didn't understand what I was trying to say..

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Void Star I don't dislike ntr think you should added it in the game.

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Erm, this dude said absolutely nothing about your NTR content

But to be fair, if you cut out all your NTR content, you would have no content. NTR is a great element, that belongs in every story to some degree, like salt is a great additive to every meal. You however, rip the cap off the salt shaker and dump the whole goddamned thing all over the food. I think it worked incredibly well in Forsaken Paradise, the story set the stage for that perfectly, but Pandora's Box is just downright fucking depressing.

Wow. You sure are one finicky pervert. I've known neurotic housecats who were less particular. 

Yes! Ellie the brightest character.