Vivid character development -- Daisy & mom-in-law have such interesting and subtle paths of desire and choice. I LOVE them both, and how their contrasting sexualities combine and suffuse the story.
My only sadness (because it could be SO MUCH more erotic!) is how the daughter, Laura, has been characterized. I understand the antipathy towards 'too-young', thereby making her '18'. But 1)- she looks more like 25, making the physical difference btw her and Daisy negligible. 2) - Laura could STILL be '18' and LOOK more like 16, instead of the other way around. 3) - it's very strange to see someone who looks like an adult referring to 'weiners' and pursuing Cheerleading. I hope someone gets braver in your next endeavor, as I don't know how you'd fix this now...