Very good idea and has a very fun story. One feedback that I would like to throw in there. I know that this particular visual novel is more of a yaoi story side. I think if you were to cast a broader net adding a male protagonist to choose from and making the two females romanceable. I think you would definitely get more attention for crowdfunding. I know that's a lot of work but it's definitely a good story with good characters. The level of work for your female protagonist that you play through and the personalities that all of the characters had. I think if you gave more opportunity add male audience to the story. I believe it would definitely get more funding. Also if could have either protagonist that you don't play as then become a romance path opportunity. A unique spin that's not really out there a lot of.
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Thanks for the feedback! This was actually one of our very first considerations, but we realized that we'll have to re-draw all the CGs. I'm not sure if our lead artist currently has the bandwidth for so much at the moment, and we don't wish to overpromise and get swamped. We definitely have such thoughts,, and if more people do raise up this issue we might consider it. But for now, it's not planned. We also do have thoughts about a Clarice backstory (so you get to play as Clarice), but our focus will be finishing Bobby and Jefe's routes for now.