Nnnnope! It's perfect! :3
Zen, Zen was a detective and was a very skilled one, she would never leave a case unsolved. It just wasn't like her, a lot of people knew that everyone who was in her life knew that she would never back down from a case, now..I can comprehend that you see the word never a lot..but its true. She has always been a great detective, love wasn't in her book, everytime she had an interest they all either left or fell out of love so she had walls for love, she was guarded, I mean who wouldn't?..now a lot of things were happening lately and she was very interested. Ya see, there was a killing spree going on and I know you think that's normal well in cases its normal but really, people were terrified absolutely scared out of their minds and no one and when I mean no one, I mean no one wanted that case but one person did...and that was detective Zen.
And she had finally gotten a case for the feeble town, House 623 -and the rest of the address lol-, There was an anonymous report murder of a man who was thought to be single, alone, and of course dead...she would soon found out who reported it...and what happened...but let's start from the beginning, shall we? The moment she had gotten to the house, she could see something slightly off...the door was cracked open, now it could've just been left open by mistake, but she wouldn't take risks...and the cracked glass...sure it was a slightly old house, but what was with the window..?
Quite a lovely house, I can see why some people might've broke in, maybe it was just some thief that panicked, or maybe it was him...either way, she had no choice, or well plenty, but she thought otherwise...the door practically opened itself when she placed her hand on the knob, a cold breeze washing over her...
She gave out a quiet breath as she poked her head in first, placing her hand on her pistol (ik its not really a great weapon but she has to protect herself somehow) anyway, she then slowly walked in, making sure to be cautious, she then raised her hand and flickee the light but she just heard a small buzz, the light wouldn't come on.
"F-Fuck..."
She said under her breath before pulling out a small flashlight from her police belt that her friend overlord gave to her, she then starting walking over to the window, after she did she squated down and picked up a shard of glass, she then brought to her face, examining it.