Viability: Had a couple of moments of confusion when talking to Viktor, I think some of the dialogue options were showing up too early.
Presentation: Really great illustrations, I think they add a lot to the story and help place the player inside of a well-realized world. Some of the fonts chosen and the layout made it hard to read, but I think you made a lot of ambitious choices with the presentation which is awesome to see.
Theming: Interesting theme and set-up for a story. A lot of playful dialogue and real-world references were fun!
Engagement: Engaging right from the beginning, I like how you throw the player right into the middle of the action through dialogue! I like the added option of starting from the beginning, it makes sense and helps guide the player to make different dialogue choices in a new playthrough.