Honestly - quite a good game overall, I'm seriously impressed. There's some grammar/punctuation issues at parts, but I like how detailed it is. I might be weird but I like games with tons of reading in them.
Couple requests/comments: First, you might want to limit certain quests, one of the other characters came over to the house and saw female Jean before I did the quest where he/she was even introduced.
Also, can there be a more wholesome/less kinky Eleanor romance path? The dominance and stuff works with some characters (especially Kyo), but tbh I think a more wholesome angle would work really well with her, considering there's more interaction between the two and kind of a stronger friendship. Weird thing to say about a porn game but whatever.
Otherwise, 9/10.