I can't recommend your video to the kids - being an artist it's easy to get discouraged by any flavor of critique. But it's a fun video, anyone else should like it. By the way, in the basement of horrors, a google image search for "hamburger" was involved in the development of art resources... :-)
If you play the other games, I recommend Get Some Sleep as the first - it has several endings and less sensory overload than Sweet Nightmares. I love SN, but you must steel your nerves for it, and take your time to check out the surreal biz going on in it.