Hello, Milkynail.
I've been playing your game about 2 weeks now, on and off and it's been fun to see all that's on offer.
I've enjoyed many of the scenes and been genuinely moved by some of them (not what I expected, but very very good thing nonetheless.)
What I have noticed is that the female characters, are relatively undeveloped compared to the males, and it would be nice to see a more balanced experience.
For example the brother's room has a lot more stuff to do and opportunities for "fun", but the sister basically has the sleep scene and a couple of scenes that pop up randomly. It would be neat to be able to search her room for toys like you can for the brother's magazines.
And similarly, the father has a more opportunities than the mother, whose scenes tend to depend on the father's scenes occurring first.
I like the sound of the mini games and astral dimension.
Teleporting to school at the right time is a good idea, even with the debuff. I don't particularly like how the parents spank you at 9:00 when you technically haven't missed a class yet, and thus they make you late for school. Maybe replace that with a scene where the parents get mad and drive you to school while scolding you. (and i understand why getting spanked reduces corruption, but since the scene states you enjoyed it, it ought to increase corruption)
The spanking ought to trigger if you leave school early, and only when the parents get home from work, as currently the parents seem to teleport home from work to spank you, no matter what time it is.
I am really looking forward to seeing the new version of the game and will keep following you for updates.
All the best,
August.