I love your game, the story and the visuals!!! but the dialogue could use some some work... I would love to help you proof-reading or extending dialogue for free because I cant afford to become a Patreon... Drop me a message at my temp email adress vupesomused@vintomaper.com if you're interested :) then i can give you my actual email address (because itch.io doesn't have direct messaging and i don't want to put it here in public)