Hey, thank you for the "Good things". Much appreciated.
As for typos and writing in general, unfortunately I can't improve it much on my own, I would need help from a native speaker. Want a hobby? =)
Okay, let's get down to business: I don't understand your note about the dice system. You say that on d6 having successes for 3+ is different than having successes with even numbers? It's still 3 out of 6 distributed equally.
As far as exp is concerned, I do not agree at all, in fact, it can be summarized in 7 lines (see page 53). Everything else, are ideas and tables to help those who are a little slow with math.