The game is pretty early in development with a lot of work still in progress. The art looks good, though the girls' 'novel'appearance differs from their 'scene' appearance for no reason(like hair color and accessories on Nija or complexion change on Kiara). The story is there, but some seemingly serious choices lead to no consequences(like the one before the final fight of this build; the one on the square was pretty atmospheric though). The combat needs work, not much else to say here. And why would you use facial animations in dialogues? My eyes are down there, on the text, and I've only noticed them waay into the game. That's just my preference though - static images allow for more details (so Nija might not've lost her chains).
Please don't let any of that rant discourage you - you're doing great work here, and I hope to see more of it.