Speaking as someone with limited experience with almost everything remotely involved here, from genre to source material, I strongly appreciate both how incredibly absurd this story is so far and how much you've made it almost overwhelmingly clear that you realize it's absurd. This game knows precisely what it is, and from what I've seen so far, it benefits from that. I also feel like I actually really need to think about what I say, which is good for a game like this!
You've got a strong basis here so far! Keep it up!