What a sweet VN demo!! The story is a great taste of something bigger that I'd love to read more of, well written and easy to get into. Everything from the music to the click/search elements are well put together and really suit the narrative.
The illustrations are awesome; I really love the character sprites and all of their animations! They add so much flavor and character to the dialogue, giving every piece of dialogue a clear tone-- not to mention smooth and satisfying to look at, too.
Wonderful work! I'd love to read and play more :D