A few notes from me, first off, it's a pretty good game, it has a nice story so far, and you've made something quite good visually-wise when it comes to what you're using!
And also, on another note, I did see a few spots where the writing and dialogue could be improved a bit, and if you want, I could help with that, I do in fact kinda specialize in dialogs and making them better, and more detailed, and for this game, if you want I could help for free!