This is really good! I like the upbeat music and the artwork is amazing!!! Effects are pretty cool too and seeing rain in the beginning... Makes it all even better. Heh heh.
The characters (the ones we can see) are adorable. I got so used to "Theo" and I figured stuffs out from the story anddddddddddd... I can't wait to see what happens next!
Only problem was that the story was short... It just makes you want to continue reading... Or get lost in your own mind until more of the story comes up. (This is not to pressure... It's for silliness.)
Thank you!!! I wish you the best of luck!!! Keep up the great work!!!