I enjoyed the character designs (you can't go wrong with guys with purple-dark nail polish). Leo’s dark eyeshadow is awesome!
The number of CGs for such a short VN is quite impressive. As was the painting's detail on the museum background picture.
But there is one thing I didn’t get. Why are the naked sprites censored with so much pixelation, when the CGs aren’t censored at all and let you see everything in its full glory?
The character sprites are quite dynamic in poses, but I feel they could use a transition changing between them, rather than being automatic. The character names above the textbox are sometimes hard to read against the background.
That aside, it was quite an enjoyable read. I am not familiar at all with the webcomic that spawned these characters but I could still understand the story and liked it.