Don't read this if you haven't played the game.
Emily seems like a shitty DM to me, or maybe an inexperienced one. She says this starter adventure is to help the girls get used to the game, to get used to rolling dice and such, and yet she rolls every dice roll. She doesn't let either of the girls even touch the dice. On top of that, there are more than one 'dick DM' moments in the game and her attitude is overall apathetic.
Also, I hope there ends up being a full campaign after the starter adventure, or at least that the starter adventure ends up being bigger. I'm not asking for either right now, because I know you're working hard as hell on this and I don't want to rush you, but I'm definitely looking forward to there being more of this in the future. Good work overall, my dude.