Enjoyable game with an interesting story. I appreciate you not filling it with profanity every sentence like some I've played. Profanity is the refuge of a limited mind that can't think well. One thing you should do though is know when to use "I" and "Me". At the very start it says, "After that it was just my father and I." It should be "my father and me" or even better, "me and my father. You only use "I" when it's the subject of the sentence such as "My father and I went to the store." But as a direct object it should be "Me". It sounds ignorant when it's used incorrectly, akin to saying "Me went to the store." That sounds retarded doesn't it. Check it out, you'll see. Saying "my father and I" sounds like someone trying to sound sophisticated and failing. Other than that, I really enjoyed this game and wish you well in writing more.
I have and I know I'm right. You go look it up. Its ony I when the subject of the sentence, its me when its the object. Before mouthing off you should verify what you're saying otherwise you make yourself look like an ignorant fool.
https://medium.com/@The_YUNiversity/q-is-it-you-and-i-or-you-and-me-2ee3cc312f0a