Just finished playing the current version of the game, and I have to say that I am very pleasantly surprised by it. The story is very interesting, and it's becoming more and more intriguing as the game progresses. The dialogue and descriptions are very well written, which greatly enhances the experience. The characters are nicely fleshed out [in more ways than one ;) ] and have a lot of potential. I love that they aren't just simple one-dimensional characters that are either good or evil. They are more profound, which makes for much more interesting interactions. There's actually quite a lot of humor in those interactions too, had me laughing out loud several times.
Ronan's and Nick's story is very compelling, I look forward to see how it will develop. On Alex's side, I am currently most interested in his relationship with Connor. I love their flirtatious quipping and back-and-forth jokes (no to mention the smoldering looks that Connor throws at Alex) , so I'll hope we will get to see more of that in later chapters.
Oh, and of course the erotic scenes themselves are great too. I like that you have a choice how far and how fast you want to take it with each character.
I'm happy that I came across this novel, and I'm excited to see more. Great job and keep up the good work!