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Hey, first of all, well done for making this game, and by the comments I can tell you look like a pretty cool guy and all. I see you've put your heart into this, so take what I'm going to say as genuine criticism and things to improve on games to come if you're gonna make others (or you could... you know, ignore me, it's really up to you)

spoilers warning btw

The thing I don't enjoy with these types of games is the fact that you don't really do anything to link the story with what we play. Each chapter you display a text to tell a story, that you conclude by doing the same thing at the very end. In between these things we only see something I guess is supposed to be linked with the story, but I can't seem to understand how. Jumpscares can be okay (even if it's kinda funny for a silent hill inspired game to use that since silent hill doesn't really rely on jumpscares) but I fail to see the correlation between the scary ghost girl and the boy's story for example. And if anything, I think a game is at its most interesting when it tells something through gameplay. Like you could have done something on the first story where, instead of wondering endlessly on a lone road, you made us kill the kid's parents while he imagined something else and just realized it later. I don't see the point of making a game if you're going to tell us the story through text, you'd rather write a creepypasta instead in my opinion.

I'll give you credit where it's due though, some jumpscares spooked me well and the game looks pretty well coded, I didn't spot any bugs at all so that's cool. Also the sounds are well put together, and the atmosphere is pretty good, so props to you for that. (although sometimes it's a bit too loud)

In any case, keep it up, there's still room for improvement, and in the end if you enjoy it, who cares, right ?



(on the other hand, wth is this file size, like bruh xD)

I NEEDED THIS!!! thanks so much for your critic I appreciate everything you said and yeah the file is super large cuz… I made the Forest way to large even though you can’t see it you really only explore like 3% of the forest the rest I copied in by accident lolll. Thanks again I’ll def keep all those things in my mind for the next game!

Glad you took it well, I'm looking forward for what you're gonna do next ^^