Love the story!
It's characters and overall vibe is gritty with a splash of comedy thats very well mixed together, i have to admit you made me laugh on multiple occassions! I'd love to see more of that humour come out as the Main Character got more used to his situation. And for the love of all that is unholy, we need more of that broship with Daryl!
Another thing.
When you catch Jake being a creep on Liz and Amber, you have the chance to get him to heck off, but there isn't any choices to confront him about it later on.
Is that a dev decision or is it because Jake simply made the MC forget the encounter?
Now that the praise is done, i wanted to ask if you at any point want the game to have voice actors? If yes, then i'd like to offer my help! I also have 9 years experience in making music, so if you want to ''Up'' the sound immersion in the game i'd love to help out! (Tho i make electronic music i think i can do some more jazzy things if needed)
All in all, amazing game.
Story 9/10 (Enjoyable, catching and immersive!)
Comedy 10/10 (Couple memes, sarcasm and smart remarks)
Characters 10/10 (Well written, original and feels alive)
Art 10/10 (Gritty and kind of watery, but it fits the vibe!)
Choices 7/10 (Leads to fun scenes, but doesnt feel like they have an overall impact or hard consequence)
To the others reading: Play the game, it goes a bit slow the first 1-2 weeks, but it picks up after that and it will have you laughing, crying and feeling like a badass!