This is my first review I've written, but since this is my favorite game on this site, I thought I should leave some feedback.
This game is extremely good, and a lot more than I ever expected. The story and characters are great, this was the first time I was really invested in an adult game. There were funny, happy, sad, and exciting (in more ways than one, if you know what I mean) moments, and the story has a great variety of things that happen.
The only thing I think could be improved would be a better epilogue, like maybe a chapter more that focuses on the new life you get; maybe a bit more stuff about the pregnancies(although that might just be my personal preference) and maybe a bit more interactions between the different girls, because some girls, so that the characters feel a bit more connected.
But again, wonderful game and I can't wait for your next one!