This is really well made. I was not expecting dialogue of this quality, and thus far all the characters are really well executed and quite compelling. This is definitely one to watch and I'm excited to see where you will take it. Have you developed a road map/do you know how many chapters you are expecting to have overall?
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I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the kind words.
As for a road map, the way I've phrased it is there is a destination (four specific endings are planned and outlined) and I've got some destinations to hit on the way there with some guideposts. I don't have an outline by chapter but I know where I'm going, though I'm also taking feedback that is consistent with the story I want to tell into consideration (eg, a character needs more development, etc.).
We've got two or three more chapters to wrap up Act 1, then I'll begin working on Act 2. At this pace and with what I have planned, I expect development will take another 18 months or so.