Hello Taifun Riders,
A couple of weeks ago, I asked for the best way to send you a list of typos, but either you did not see that post or prefer not to disclose a public way to contact you, so here's my list of typos:
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The last free realm on the contininent => continent
Prologue Part 1
- I... I wasn't expecting this... Not least not so soon => At least not so soon
- before my body lays in the ground => on the ground
- The most of the skills consum AP => Most of the skills consume AP
- Nulkan: I'm really sorry but... I need to feel that... I'm not part of this atrocity. That I've done all I could to right the wrongs done today => This should be "Stranger", not Nulkan
- Nulkan: Now I see that my doubts were real... => Should be Dynae
- Nulkan: But this invasion... => Should be Dynae
- Dynae: I see. I suspected that... => Should be Nulkan
- Saraith: They would respect the decision => They would not respect the decision
- Saraith: Let me just say that in Betresh you and your men... => Bertresh
- Dynae: I don't need to know what Drascy's was hiding ... => Drascys
- Dynae: Drascy's arrival was blessing => Drascys'
- Dynae: There's strenght inside you Nulkan. => strength
- Nulkan: I do as she says. The demon girl imbues some kind of magic unto me. => onto me. (or into me)
- Saraith: Dynae is a great archmage, but also very beatiful, isn't she => beautiful
Prologue Part 2
- Dynae: It's not that I am regreting of anything. => It's not that I am regretting anything (2 t's, no "of")
- "feran Girl" => "Feran girl" or "Feran Girl" (3 places)
- Dynae: ... And I must say Tregor has nothing to do. => And I must say Tregor won't be able to do anything.
- As soon as she lays on one of the tween beds => twin beds
- Misha battle: I carry her and pay for her to have a room to spend the night in in another inn. => night in another inn.
- Wave 3: they see Tregor running away with some of their man => with some of his men
- Saraith: Even though I'm happy to see you two aren't lossing your time, heehee... => loosing time, heehee...
- Dynae: (after rejecting Nadine): Well, nadine told us about this => Saraith told us about this
Leaving for Eldrien
- Saraith: Yes sir! => Saraith? Shouldn't this be just "soldier", or something similar?
- Luth: He was Drascy's right hand for many years, and something tells me he's the real force behind Drascy's assassination => Drascys' (twice)
- Nulkan: A Political marriage? Why? Isn't that a bit outdated? => A political (lowercase P, yes I'm a nit picker)
- Yraselle: Araxian influece has been like a noose => influence
- Nulkan: This seems to have started at the same time as Drascys' assasination => assassination
- Yraselle: Pyrus!! Retreat, now! and realease my dad!! I command you => release my father (typo, and "dad" is really weird in this context)
- Yraselle: I command you to stop and release my dad! => my father
- Dynae: his attempted casting failed to stablize => stabilize
Leaving for Nocverchis
- Nulkan: It's an excellent opportunity to bolster our away from the prying eyes of Arax => "bolster our away"??? Not sure what is meant by this.
- Saraith: Yes sir! => Saraith? Shouldn't this be just "soldier", or something similar?
- Nulkan: "leaving the Yalen border behind" => needs an update, in this case I left from Eldrien
- Nulkan: As we continue the forest progressively... => As we continue, the forest progressively... (missing a coma)
- Dynae: Nulkan... to the north of Nocverchis there's the 6th Executor [...] Something tells me he must be the one responsible => Needs an update, does not make great sense when we're going to Nocverchis from Eldrien.
- Nulkan: Tell us. Dynae. => Tell us, Dynae
North of Nocverchis
- Luth: When did you have intend to teach her to fight => either "When did you intend to teach her to fight" or "When were you intending to teach her to fight" (I prefer the 2nd version, past tense)
- Nulkan: About 15 Nocverchians are there captured in cages => are there, captured in cages
- Nulkan: Some of them fleed. Other tried to fight, but they soon fleed => fled (2 places)
- Nulkan: No more assasinnations => assassinations
- Misha: It smells to precum and there's no other smell around here. => Phrase is hard to make sense of. maybe "It smells precum..." or "It smells like precum..."
- Ione: And if we win, will be likely thanks to it as well => And if we win, it will likely be thanks to it as well (And it should be Nulkan, no?)
- Ione: Sometimes she even gives little biteboon my neck... => little bites on my neck...
Bug in Eldrien: Selecting "Boost soldiers' morale" also triggers "take a walk..."
Bug in Nocverchis: Izuin is almost constantly present in the scenes