Played 5 minutes of it and am curious... how old is the main character supposed to be? He acts like he is 10 and knows nothing about anything at all lol.
Also, what's up with the whole "your parents disappeared and left this big farm for me to take care (and possibly profit of), but I know they are fine because... not telling you." behavior from the uncle? Who in the world would hear that and not have about 300 red flags raised and their phone at hand to call the cops?
I like how the characters look but the writing is not convincing at all. No adult would be that brain dead. So far it's a 3/5 for me.
Hello I’m happy for your review, the main character is about 17 years old that shows slightly more. And yes! You’re right it’s a bit dumb, because it grew up with little sociality and little experience, but it’s something I wanted because the character will grow in the game. The missing parents.. the farm and the uncle etc. is still a whole story to discover. In this story I have already planned many things that will have to be discovered but to compose it takes time, and for the story I can not unravel everything immediately otherwise what would be the pleasure? your 3/5 I hope one day will become a 5/5, but it takes me some time. Meanwhile I hope you continue to follow developments :) Have fun
I understand your view but I suggest that you at least try to make the ways he reacts to the events in the story a little more realistic as to make him more relatable to the player. So far I only feel the urge to punch him for being idiotic.
I do appreciate that you took the time to reply and that you take criticism politely. I wish you luck with the project and I'll keep following your progress.
The character is 17 years old and apart from being a little provocative, does not have sex with anyone except his first wank! Soon he will grow up and will be over 18 years old.
I wanted the character to grow in the game... he just has fantasies about bigger people but I don’t think this is pedopornographic material. At most gerontophile :D
Of course I've played it, and I'm just trying to help you. It would take so little effort to change the child's age from 17 to 18, but it doesn't sound like you want to listen. From the Department of Justice web page:
Section 2256 of Title 18, United States Code, defines child pornography as any visual depiction of sexually explicit conduct involving a minor (someone under 18 years of age). Visual depictions include photographs, videos, digital or computer generated images indistinguishable from an actual minor, and images created, adapted, or modified, but appear to depict an identifiable, actual minor. Undeveloped film, undeveloped videotape, and electronically stored data that can be converted into a visual image of child pornography are also deemed illegal visual depictions under federal law.
You show a 17 year old naked? Masturbating? In the U.S.:
"Notably, the legal definition of sexually explicit conduct does not require that an image depict a child engaging in sexual activity. A picture of a naked child may constitute illegal child pornography if it is sufficiently sexually suggestive. Additionally, the age of consent for sexual activity in a given state is irrelevant; any depiction of a minor under 18 years of age engaging in sexually explicit conduct is illegal."
You could avoid ALL this by just saying at the beginning of the game that all characters are 18+. As it is, I could be convicted of a federal crime for having this game on my PC. I love Uncle Ray, but I had to delete this as soon as you said the MC is 17.
oh ok! I never told the age of the character within the game... just here. so here I tell you that he is 18 years old. so I guess you can stay the game on your computer, I didn’t think the laws were so strict, I’m Italian from here there’s the law but I’m not so strict, even if we were to ban or censor or denounce for every naked person you see... we would have to kill the whole Sistine Chapel etc. etc.