Hi, if you stil develop it, then follow these suggestions to improve your game.
- You made this game in Unity, therefore take care of the physic of the game.
- Map is a bit bored, so add some scene in the background. (Not necessary)
- To make your game look better, watch this video.
- Eyes of the player should flashes to make it's more natural.
- Increase variety of obstacle (Moving platform, Rotating platfrom...)
- Menu, dead screen...
- Effect when player died.
With all of the suggestions above, i hope you can change you game significantly. Keep developing!
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https://hit-game.itch.io/square-gam
If you played it, then let me know your thoughts.