Hi devs, while I do indeed say I enjoyed this game very much, I will say that there is one complaint I have. And for anyone else read no further if you dislike *SPOILERS* You have been warned.
The main complaint I have in this game, is that at least if you conquer the inquisitrix's heart and have a naga daughter, yet you decide to try and see if there's a harem route and you just so happen to choose (at the very least) the route with Mina as your concubine, Your Naga Daughter turns into quite the Yandere Bitch, even if NTR is set to off, now I'm not one to judge kinks, and I personally don't mind my porn games to be sprinkled with a bit of a incest fetish, but I'm personally against Yandere Naga Daughter unless you include a harem route, lump Mina (and possibly others, I didn't wanna even check, I didn't like this plot point that much) getting absorbed by Naga-chan into the NTR tag, or add a "psycho stalker bitch" tag that disables this event entirely. In my (Honestly Stupid) Opinion, the reason Sex after a Massage is called "A massage with a Happy Ending" is because sex is supposed to be associated with a feeling of Euphoric happiness (hence my general disdain for NTR, and Guro/Vore) and as such I wanted to play this game, (Using the power fantasy mode obviously) as a dragon who is grumpy but kind, and sees violence as only a disgusting tool which sometimes must be used, to the point that, so long as you don't seriously disrespect him or hurt him/ others he has come to care for, he will forgive most impertinence or physical harm. But if you consistenly treat him as a threat to the world, or you attempt to harm him or someone he cares for (Adalaide as a prime example), he becomes a vengeful beast, who will save your life, if only to prolong your suffering *ahem* The Regent *ahem*. Hell, if you want to attempt to appease me, but don't think it's worth an entire rewrite of your existing script, hit me up on discord @ParadoxCipher18 (ArtyCHOKE)#2852, and since I'm a halfway decent writer, I will rewrite it FOR YOU, FOR FREE. That is how much I want to support you guys, that I will work for you guys without seeing a damn cent, despite my financial situation, sheerly so that I don't feel dissatisfied with a work that was otherwise really good, hell, even if you like my propsal to rewrite the script to be more satisfying for me, but insist on paying me, I would rather get a named special thanks in the final release, than monetary compensation, or if y'all (after asking for a sample, and like what you see) ask me to join the team permanently (yes, unrealistic and wishful thinking, but still) I will refuse payment of any kind when it comes to ideas or writing related specifically to THIS project. Again as I wind down this lecture of a critque that (probably) doesn't matter in the long run. I would like to reiterate that I did very much enjoy your game, however having a sense of serene fluffiness at the end of trying to complete every girl's "Paragon/Lover/Kind King" route I get forced to either Violently Rape or Repeatedly Murder a character I have grown connected to has left me Immensely dissatisfied with the potential progression of this story going forward. I would love to hear a reply from y'all, here on Itch or even over on Discord, and even if I don't hear any response at all, I wish all of you at 4MinuteWarning a pleasant and wonderful time, and thank you for at least reading my comment.