Some top animation here with some great gameplay elements. The overarching narrative is good and interesting, the dialogue is a little juvenile in places, blocking some of the characterisation for the girls (although I've only met two of them so far). Adding animations for climax scenes would also be a bonus instead of transitioning to the 'result'.
EDIT: As the story progresses, transitions get a bit better
EDIT: The word 'mate' is used a bit too much, it doesn't work when Lily is having a good time and says 'mhhmmm mate' 😂
8/10 Animation
7/10 Narrative
3/10 Dialogue
7/10 Gameplay
N/A Renders
9/10 Environments
7/10 Soundtrack
7/10 Sex Scene
7/10 Sex Dialogue
7/10 Character Design
Well done, keep up the good work 👍