It's always cool to get feedback from other writers. I've never identified as a writer and honestly, I'm still not sure that I do because I'm sorta just stumbling through this whole thing. It's even more empowering when people talk about having raw emotional reactions to various scenes. I've had many emotional reactions in writing them so it just feels cool when you can pass that along to others--specifically those that are more verse in the art of writing.
heh, Ash has skyrocketed to the top of the list for a lot of people. I've sorta joked on the Discord that I think I made a mistake and made the supporting character better than the mains, lol. He's soooo chaotic but warm then completely manipulative in the next scene. I pretty much shake my head every time I write him but he's super fun and has really grown on me