Hi! I know how you feel about bad ends, haha. I try to avoid them but if they exist, I can’t help but want to know what happens. Mint and Honey doesn’t have any bad ends though, it’s a linear story with just one ending. Working on this really made me realize how weak I am when it comes to writing, so I do agree with you that my transitions need work, thank you for the feedback! I hope you enjoyed it!