Just wanted to say this game is incredible! Definitely the best novel I've played and I'm super excited to see what's next. And your artist definitely needs a raise cause WOW! Just a few things, I much prefer the old story instead of the new story. It feels very unnatural. Secondly when we have the flash forward and we have another scene with Minerva, It's the exact same scene as the first one with Minerva so maybe you'd want to look into that and maybe change a little bit. Thirdly, I feel that the content for Hermoine and Luna is lacking a bit, so I'd love to see some more scenes for them in the future. But this game is amazing and I'm so invested to see what you guys do with it next!