Ahh, a tip on that, I know the story is based a lot on personal stuff, and I don't really want to undermine that, but can you re-write some of it so that it doesn't sound as rapey?
As in like something that really struck me the wrong way, which is a spoiler so if you are new to the game skip the next paragraph
when Braden admitted to literally rape Zack, and it was brushed off, and not the type of the sexual assault that Zack did, but literally raping someone in their sleep.
I really took a problem in that, since I don't really think it should have passed with not much emphasis, or it not being a diverging point in the storyline.
BTW I haven't played much beyond that due to the shock and of it all, so IDK if this get redeemed.
Generally I was really impressed with the game writing wise, the characters felt like real characters, it was complex/weird/fucked-up and the narrative was superb, it was the first sexual game where it managed to feel more than the sexual part of it, and honestly pushed so much further in its little details, it was the best visual novel I have played regardless of it being framed as a "sex game", my only minor issue was the pacing, in some of the scenes it felt quite off, which can be due to the nature of visual novels as a whole.
Overall I wish you would take the feedback regarding the rapey feel into consideration, and good luck with the game development!!