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I spotted a few more typos. Still the fight with the orcs in chapter 2. 

The first isn't strictly speaking a typo, but it stood out. Eleanor has the line: "So be it. FOR THE Empire!" before charging at the orcs. It would make more sense to have "EMPIRE" since I doubt she'd only scream the first 2 words. 

A few pages later there's a paragraph about how the same woman will fight orcs not caught up in a web. The sentence is about the orcs: "All three started getting up at the same time, but Eleanor was the quicker of the tree." It should either be that she was the fastest of the 4 since all 4 combatants are in focus or that she was "quicker than the three orcs". I doubt a tree sprouted on the battlefield all of a sudden.  

P.S. You probably figured this out already, but I saw I forgot to say this before. Animals like boars, deer and horses have hooves/hoofs. I wanted to mention it since I pointed out a problem last time, but forgot to add a solution. 

And would it be possible to have a dedicated section for typos? It'll probably be easier to keep track of them in one place. Just an idea. :) 

Ah, thank you for the corrections. We have a channel in our discord dedicated to typos, you're more than welcome to join us there. 


I also corrected many, many typos since this version was released almost 3 months ago. I'll take a proper look at your suggestions when I have some time, but now we're busy getting Chapter 6 ready for the public release, which should come out tomorrow.