I believe I should start by saying his is really a great game.
I just noticed something. While on most route you use generic or changed most comercial name (blazing sigil for fire emblem, bulleye for target, etc.), on Dozer route, notably on day 3, you use Aleve and Advil, wich are both trademark. The generic name for Aleve is naproxen sodium, while the generic name for Advil is ibuprofen. Tylenol is acetaminophen and Aspirin is acetylsalicylic acid btw.
Just someting I noted. Also, there is some inconsistency in the background, mainly the MC room.