It's a cute premise, but I am not sure if I enjoy the direction you took the design. The screen get's easily cluttered with information overload. I can give points on creativity and ideas (it's kind of cute to have a bunch of bickering toddler-like characters), but if you want to work more on this in the future you would have to overhaul a few design choices. See if there is say way to lower the amount of content on the screen would be a good starting point.