Ok so let's get the obvious stuff out:
This game is stunning, charming (really liked the dialogue box and the starting cutscene).
It is also a short game, which is fine for a jam. BUT it has so much potential that I presonally would like to see you progress it. So much potential. Audio is amazing.
It is also quite hard to lose in this current stage. I had to run and stand infront of the cannons for a good 20 seconds before I failed. But this can be easily changed when you increase the difficulty.
This is one of the games in the jam where I'm really amazed that it was made in 48 hours.
Very well done!~