(alright how about a female transitioning to male or a male transitioning to female with a college student..?)
He looked at her and a few kids started to come in.
(that's good)
"..."
(Alright I'll go ask her)
"Well, people are starting to come in..Travis and Renee get down here."
"...so....is there a curfew?"
"No..Just people have schedules.."
(I asked she didn't say anything yet)
(ok)
"Oh..."
(She responded maybe, so you should go post the story plot line in the MGM comments)
"Mhm.."
(kk)
"Well,I might have to set myself a curfew"
"You mean a schedule.."
"I guess..."