Admittedly, I was a little bit turned off by the first couple of scenes (in the past?), mostly because the expository dialogue with MC's friend was a bit too on the nose, despite their interaction being fun and wholesome overall. On the other hand, I'm glad to see that a lot of the cool futuristic stuff is given enough attention, cuz it definitely makes the reading experience more immersive, and a bit spooky in the best way possible.
Other than that, and this is just a matter of personal taste, but it's been a long while since I've had a canine husband I can actually simp for, I need more of this cute stinky boy. I'm curious to see how his relationship with "the human" will develop, partially because I'd find it pretty great if it ends up becoming some sort of profound friendship or something, somehow, but maybe that's just me. Either way, there's a whole lot of stuff that needs to be considered in that regard, so I'm very intrigued.