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Cherry came in and sat on her phone (ah yes. Here we go.) she wasnt her previous happy-go-lucky self. The ray of sunshine had turned into a dull shadow. Her clothes were different and her hair was in a different style. She looked like a whole other person

“They say you dont talk. So i want to see how long youll stay silent if i just keep talking and talking and talking. Surely youll sag something then. If you dont talk. Then honestly i couldnt care less. Sound fair?”

She sounded like cherry but her demeanor was different and her whole vibe was off (ah. Beautiful. Also had to switch picrews bc i couldnt find the og.)

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago

.+*☹︎ He'd stare though not caring for your looks at all he'd just say nothing. It's like he seriously had nothing to say. Mute emotionless what's next I wonder? He has so many things going wrong for him what else will go wrong. Will this girl keep babbling to herself or is she talking to me I wonder. She is so annoying... of course the thoughts only thickened a dark cloud a very dark cloud that covered him from anything else and anyone else. That isn't love of course! None of this is. Where is all the love where has it gone he wondered as he would start to scratch himself a bit more. The dirtiness the disgusting happiness here was overwhelming the sadness it was disgusting to him . . . ☆*+.

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)4 years ago

“youre not even listening. You know what fuck you man. Even a chair is better company.”

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago

.+*☹︎ Kana would look at you with that look it was a different look but had the same feel to it. His eyes would gleam a slight happiness after you would say, ' f-ck you ' he liked that. It made him feel amazing. Though it wasn't enough nothing was for him. He wanted more, and more. He would never stop taking that's just how he is. He would lay back down and cover himself in the bloody sheets they got more and more bloody . . . .☆*+.

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)4 years ago (1 edit)

“You son of a bitch! Now youre fucking listening! Man. I bet your parents fucking hated you! Youre a piece of shit you know! A piece if stupid little dog shit! No one loved you and no one ever will! No one will ever love you you hear!”

She kicked the bed into the wall and he flew iff the bed. She stormed off in anger

“Fucking bull shit.”

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago (2 edits)

( That wasn’t speaking I was quoting what you said- AYO THESE THESE ARE HIS THINGIES FOR SPEAKING- "☹︎ e ☻︎" THIS IS QUOTING STUFF SOMEONE ELSE SAID OR HIS OWN THOUGHTS ' understand? NOW FIX IT GR )

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)4 years ago (1 edit)

(She knew he was listening by the way he looked. I think i made it quite clear that Cherry knows body language- so i just need tk remove one thing.)

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago

.+*☹︎ Kana had a smile on his face as he laid on the floor paralyzed by pure desperation. He needed someone like that. That wasn't that crybaby from before it was someone different someone he could 'love'. He yearned for more pain blood splattered all over the hospital walls and floors. He would grab and grab onto nothing of course but he wanted you to come back . . . ☆*+.

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)4 years ago

the doctors quickly ran in and helped him back onto the gurney. Of course he had no choice. The doctors faces weren’t very happy and they slammed the door behind them also locked the windows and went after Cherry

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago

.+*☹︎ He'd scream violently whining like a child wanting there toy which in this case was that other 'Cherry' he saw. She was beautiful someone so 'lovable' of course it would just be a toxic relationship to anyone else but to him. He loved it he wanted it he hated this place. He just wanted to go 'Home' ☆*+.

Do Crime(Nightcrawler)4 years ago

everything went silent for a while until there was crying coming from outside. It sounded like a small child was crying until the crying person walked through the door. It was cherry but she was acting like a little kid. Then she started acting like a fancy lady then an angsty teen and she just kept switching until a she screamed stop at the top of her lungs. She was the other cherry the one that Kana liked. She took a breath and looked at Kana

“They told me to come back in and insult you more. Not the doctors or my family. They did. So i really dont want to be here so fuck you you ruined my goddamn life.”

HanakoKun☆He/Him4 years ago

.+*☹︎ He'd have a frown yet it didn't seem like he was sad more like he was happy or pleased. Maybe he felt pleasure from the insults. Maybe it made him feel at home. He would get up slightly, wavering and wobbling on the floor he would come closer and closer. Unlike him he would actually hug Cherry it was probably for a reason he knew what was coming up the same thing always happened whenever he hugged anyone he waited and waited until that thing happened that all people did to him that he 'loved' so much . . . ☆*+.

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