Hi! I'm here from manlybadasshero's playthrough on Youtube, but if I had the funds I'd love to buy this for myself at some point
For your first ever game, I think this is really good! HUGE fan of all the CGs, the game over animations, and how wild some of the expressions are. I wish I was able to push my own art to that extent, you really did an amazing job with making the characters look absolutely insane.
The plot twist definitely caught me off-guard, I wasn't expecting the angle you ended up going with, but... If you decide to keep exploring this world in future projects, I'd definitely be interested in seeing where you go with it. It's definitely an interesting angle to go for, but I think it worked out well (trying to be as spoiler-free as possible, haha).
Overall I think you did a really good job with you first official project, and I'm definitely curious to see what else you'll make in the future!<3