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*Rated 4 stars. Don't know if anyone can see my comments on those so I'll make a list.

-Not NTR, just close to it. Heck the game even tries to cut emotional attachment from the start. I say it's a good KN (kinetic novel) to get used to the NTR genre. (I hated all NTR before I started consuming more NTR works - I found out I hate NTR that tries to get the consumer to self-insert...which is not this one outside of naming the player character.)

-Outside of typos and sentence structure issues. (example: "should we go to do it since we became a sex partner" -> "should we go do it since we became sex partners?") the game as a whole works. No bugs or technical errors I have found, yeah, it's short and shouldn't have them but still a win.

-Really awesome art, chick is hot, but I'm sure there could have been a standing picture of her with expressions during the whole conversation taking place outside of her phone 'pictures'.

-I took off a star because I didn't nut. It was all sexy but way too short for me to finish. I noticed her first evidence was a video - should have had it play *wink wink*.

*All in all, I'd like more from the dev and artist. I'm keeping an eye on them on itch for now before I consider their patreons. Now some suggestions:

~Change from a kinetic novel to a visual novel to make it more accessible. This is actually a double suggestion point. When Pro-chan shows the player her 'proof' make it escalate in order from 'not bad' to 'she a slut' (basically, her body writing should be first, then her fun at the bus stop proof).

With that, the player sees the body writing and then has a choice to continue through her pictures for more 'proof'. Hopefully the artist can add more 'proofs' to this segment (no more than 5 pictures I'd say) so that I have more to work with for my satisfaction. Keeping in mind the ascended order, the player would get the 'proofs' without having to witness the bus stop proof (would either be proof 5 or 4 if ya wanna make something more hardcore for me *wink wink*) 

~A standing picture of her with expressions and emotions when not seeing her 'proofs', exploits, and/or scenes with her.

~This kind of reminds me of NT00's work with Yumi (now that one is NTR, but the ending isn't. Search for it at your own risk.) so it'd be pretty cool if you added animations or parts of her view points.

~An option for pubic hair - that's just me personally. I'd like it, but don't worry too much about it.

~Music and sound effects. Not necessary for me, but audio does help others when it comes to doing the business. Guess it would have helped me and those that don't like the audio can mute it. Everybody wins.

*That's all I got right now. Hope you continue with this because I want to nut to this, if not, I'll look forward to other works from you and Butter-T.