thank you!! I love all feedback, getting this much feedback is awesome, thank you for taking the time to write so much!! I really can't tell you how awesome that is, I will be using all feed back to hopefully make a much better over all game
I'm glad that my feedback was received well! I worried that I may have been overly harsh in some parts of my writing. I look forward to seeing the plot of this develop in future iterations and seeing the kinks ironed out.
