Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".