Man, just throw in the trash every bad comment about your game!
MOSTLY OF IT IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME. The pace, the growing, you don't waste time with "non-sense" conversations, the story is good, the mini-plots are good (like the Russian) to keep entertaining, the big plots also are good and I really believe in a BUNCH of potential coming from a VN. Potential to be one of the bests, actually.
You're an animator too, right? I could see it just in the begining, you're pretty good doing your job. AND AMAZING RENDERS. Girls are pretty well done, I liked the way you're doing different personalities pretty good.
Daydreaming in other games was just a "argh, nothing", but you reinvented it by putting not just a mini-plot there but also humor which makes even daydreaming interesting.
AMAZING SOUNDTRACK, really pretty good!
Good job with the easings. It feels more natural than most of VNs.
Your chapter 1 is good in essence, not heavy, not unfamiliar, not "what's going on here?", everything has a relaxed pace which makes the game playable for hours without making you feel sick of it.
It's the first VN I played where the MC is so well done (I really dislike the fully 1st person all the freaking time even when it's a kiss). The guy is dope, by the way. Innocent, but no so much, a great guy. I liked this project as much as I liked Being a DIK, and I love Being a DIK.
DON'T DROP THIS PROJECT, it will make you much money!