WebGL throws a wrench in everything, we had an issue with it too and didn't include it :/ Shame though, since it makes things so accessible.
I love your piano music!
I'm sure you're aware of much of this, but here are my notes as I go through:
- (e) on items after you start an interaction will close the dialogue instead of skipping to end, but the typewriter sound will keep playing. It'd be nice if it skipped, 'cause the text goes out kinda slow. (The sound effect is a bit much by the time you're halfway through the chat with Max too).
- There were interactions that gave choices without a way to interact?
Gotta say, I loved your fourth wall break.
And standing desks are great :P
Interesting story idea! Of course it was an info-dump, but I liked the touch that Max was a ghost as he's telling you about it.