Молодцы! Очень круто получилось, особенно зная то, что вы поздновато начали!

I'ma write the rest of this in english :3

A really interesting concept! I enjoyed the clever world building with the whole story taking place in space. You clearly put a lot of thought into the rules and laws of how this world works. You described things in a way that were really easy to visualize, and then the visuals on screen perfectly complemented that!

Plus, love that there's a macho Frog named Bruno :)

I feel like the main issue with the game is that there are many times where the story goes into too much detail. Things like how long the player opens the door... the details of the posters on the walls... it's all well written but it takes the reader so long to get through it all that it becomes easy to lose track of the main story's objective. That's why the soldier appearing caught me a little off guard. I got so focused on the details of the attraction that I forgot about the whole illegal thing.

I'd definitely recommend taking a look at the script specifically for things that seem like they go on for too long. Maybe copy and paste the script into a word document and turn on the "read out loud" feature to have the robotic voice read it to you. That's a great way to catch these things that are easy to skim over otherwise! Condensing the script a little to get down to the important things faster would take the story to a whole new level.

Aside from that, great work on this!!!

Keep on making great games! Can't wait to see what you all come up with in the future!

-Sasha

Был рад потратить время на эту игру!