I enjoyed this story very much. The audio accompanied the text very well, creating a great atmosphere in my head. It had a certain psychological horror feeling to it which I always find interesting. The writing gives just enough information to let the mind run wild by imagining the details. I also like the way you made certain words in the text clickable for progression. It's a nice way to tie in the things getting attention from the character to our choices. The sudden jumps in locations, together with the audio and the good, but short descriptions really translates the confusion and urgency of the character to us.
All in all, i really enjoyed the game. I'll definitly going to play it again sometime.